Journal Entry #1
Hello dear 9A students! You are my favorite of them all by far! :) But I do wish you guys could become better authors! On a lighter side, this is where you guys should post your Journal Entry #1 Writing Prompts 1, 2 and eventually #3. Don't forget to include a title for each, make it attractive and appealing to the reader! Check my post 1 so that you can read my reply to your TAG about the class! Best regards...
JE 1
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Who Am I?
Who am I? Well, my full name is Ana Gabriela Ortiz Paz. I am one meter and sixty four centimeters
Tall, my hair is dark brown and also curly. My skin tone is white. I think of myself as a happy person, but of course as everyone else, I have deffects and limitations. For example, one of my biggest struggles would be the fact that I am an extremely shy person. I also may look like I am an angry person, but I am actually not that mad, but obviously if you give me a reason to, I will get mad. But once you get to really know me you will see I can be funny and a nice person too. I think one of my best qualities could be that, if you are one of my friends, I will always be there for you, no matter what you are asking for. Another thing about me is that I am always singing, but I am really shy when it come to singing in a stage, or in public. If I have free time I usually will be playing a sport, for example basketball or volleyball that is my favorite sport. So that is pretty much me.
Ana Ortiz
T-I really liked the way you explain yourself when writing.
BorrarA-If you could describe yourself in 1 word what would it be?
G-I will suggest you to take your time while doing your journal entries.
JE # 1
ResponderBorrarWP # 1
Who Am I?
Who is David? Well I am a person that likes to have fun and also play sports. My family is evangelical and so am I. I am handsome, tall, and with black hair, and dark brown eyes. I am funny when I get to know you, I could be a good friend if you are too, I am a little bit friendly. I like to hear music, and movies too, I've always thought to be in La Estancia. I have a curly hair. I have always lived with my parents. I am a smart person with good intentions, with good qualities. For example, I am very responsible. I'm a very serious person, but when you get to know me you'll notice that I laugh and a lot. I like to be in La Estancia cause I know God brought me here for a reason now La Estancia is part of me. The good one. I am very impulsive, and I get angry fast depending on what you say or what you do. My family is Jewish because my grandfather was in World War II in Israel and then he came here. This is who I am, I am very special you may notice, but that is all part of who I am. My name is David Eduardo Hernández Machado and this is the story of my life. This is who I am, and I am happy of being me.
I like the way you describe yourself in a very confident way
BorrarWhy your Grandfather como to Honduras?
Remember to use commas
Journal Entry 1 WP 1
ResponderBorrarIntoducing... Myself?
I am Andrea Escoto and I'm 15 years and today, I'll describe myself . I have medium size brown hair, and small brown eyes, I have dark skin color, I'm 1m and 60cm in height besides that, I wear pink glasses. I don't like to be angry but sometimes, I am (like when my brother starts bothering or when I have lots of homework). I'm also responsible specially with school assigments. I'm, usually, a happy person but sometimes I'm way to negative (for example: when I have a exam, I believe I'll fail). I like to be honest in everything I do. I'm very curious, oftenly in a good way. I think music is a way to communicate your feelings with the world. Another example of my thoughts is that all people should have the same opportunities but we all know it's almost impossible.I'd like a better world specially for the ones whose rights are being disrespected, maybe in the future I'll travel around the Earth to teach everyone about their rights. I would like for all people to read, wisdom and intelligence are found in books, it is a good way to earn vocabulary, and have fun! I also like to think that 9th grade would be a great year.
T- I like the ways you share your thoughts
BorrarA- What do you like to do in your free time?
G- I think you should talk a little bit more about you
~Ana Ortiz
JE#1 WP#1 Getting to know me
ResponderBorrarMy name is Alejandra Martinez.Im 14 years old ,my skin color is white,my hair is light brown,my eyes are color light brown and I use glasses.I was born in july 17 2002 .I live in residencial las cascadas .I live with my mom,dad and sister.I consider myself a very honest ,caring and respectful person .I have a lot of hobbies but I like better to go
swimming and cook.I really like to go on trips with my family ,specially to the beach.When I grow up I want to be a pediatrician because I like kids and I would love to help them.My favorite desert is the chocolate flan cake and my favorite food is pasta.I like watching series on the tv ,I really love greys anatomy.I love cooking but when I do I prefer cooking deserts such as cakes ,cupcakes and cookies.
I really like the way you describe yourself.
BorrarWhy do you prefer cooking deserts?
Be careful with your grammar .
JE#1
ResponderBorrarWP#1
Who Am I?
Who am I?Do know myself?These are just two of the most common questions people always ask to themselves,but not all of them can answer those.Well...I do know who I am...but not completely.Trhoughout my life I've learned that sometimes our closest friends and family know us more than what we do.But I do know some things about me.I know that I have a beautiful brown and long hair,My skin color is medium tanned color.I'm a height average girl,I have brown chestnut eye color.I'm emotionally stable.I have a strong opinion,I consider myself as a natural leader,a positive(in some things),intelligent and responsible student that always try to do the best out of everything.I also think and know that I'm really good at planning and decorating stuff.Since I was a baby my parents taught me self-superation.That's why I totally hate mediocre people.I hate people that judge me without truly knowing me.Well,that was pretty much everything.
The way you described your family's teachings was fascinating.
BorrarCan you add examples of activities you like to perform?
Do not capitalize unnecessary words.
Andrea Escoto
Who I am
ResponderBorrarMy name is Angel Daniel Amador Pineda. Iam a tall man, and I have green eyes. I was born on january 15 2002 and I like to play alot of sports. My favorite sport is soccer, but I like to much to swim, and play basketball, but I like more soccer because I like to kick the ball and make goals, and have a good time with my family and friends. My favorite food is all that my mom cooks because she cooks delicious. I play soccer on the fields of Futeca and we won 4 cups of first place and 1 of second place, I got a scholarship of Futeca. I study on La Estancia School on this year, I got better grades than other years because on this schoolar year I am studying more and I got 90% of final grade on the first partial. My best friend on school is Jose Tercero.
Angel Amador
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BorrarT-I like how you describe yourself
BorrarA-How do you manage to practice a lot of sports?
G-You should check your grammar
JE 1
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What Are Friends For?
I think that all of us have friends right? But what is a real friend? What does a good friend do? Well there are many kinds of friends that you can be with, but they all have a special role in your life. First of there are those friends that aren’t really that close to you, like people that are in your classroom, or that you run into in the hallway and you say hi to. Then you have your close friends. Your close friends are people that will make you laugh, they help you if you need something, but you would not trust them with your secrets. But there also are best friends. Best friends are people that you love spending time with. They can always get you to smile when you are feeling down. And to end, there are those kinds of friends that you are more likely to call them brothers or sisters. They would do anything and everything for them. They are the ones you look at and you thank God because he actually blessed you by sending you someone so amazing.
Ana Ortiz
JE # 1
ResponderBorrarWP # 2
What is a friend?
Well a friend is part of you, he is a person that will always support you in the good days and in the worst days of your life. He will find the way for you to be comfortable and be you again. Because a good friend knows who you are and how to make you happy. If you have a friend you are so lucky because is not everyday that you can find a good friend, so if you have one, keep him with you and don't e dumb enough to let him go away. Friends are the best thing someone can have. Friends are a part of your family so you better make him feel part of your family. I think I have answered your question. A friend is someone very special. Not all of the people have that great quality of being a good friend nor having one. Sometimes you disappoint your friend, but he is your friend so he will always forgive you if he is that great of a friend. I don't know what you think, but my friend does because he is a real friend that's always supporting me. I hope you have understood how special is having a friend. I have met a lot of people, but the only ones I'm proud of knowing are my friends.
I like the way you see your friends like a part of yoyr family
BorrarHow many Best Friends do you have?
Dont dissapoint your friends!
Know About Me JE#1 WP#1
ResponderBorrarI am Maria Fernanda Martin Mercado.Ireally don't like my senconde last name,so I do not use it alot.I was born in Siguatepeque,Comayagua on December 27th,2001.I hace curly hair and I have darke skin.I am tall.I am a super sporty person.I play volleyball and basketball, but I don't really like to play basketball that much.Also, I love to cook specially desserts.I love to sing,actually I was part of the school choir and school band.My favorite color is blue.I have two sister that have my first name the only thing that change is their seconde name.I consider myself like a super supportive person I like to advice my friends when they're in any problem.I get mad when people bothers me about the same thing everytime. I always worry about my grades,because i hate to disappoint my parents. I am a super shy person and im still working on that.When my friends are having a bad day I always remember them fun moments we both share,because I try to make their day happier.I love to watch movies.I hate rice.I also love christmas well its my favorite holiday.And there is a little bit of me.
By:Maria F. Martin
T- i like the way you describe your self
BorrarA- why do you hate rice ?
G - you should love your last name
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ResponderBorrarKnow about me JE#1
ResponderBorrarMy name is Laura Giselle Campos Duarte ,my birth is on February 6. I am 16 years old. I am a tall girl with black hair , very brown eyes . I have siblings my sister is 12 years old and my brother is 4 years old . I have a pet name pecky . Sometimes I got a very aggressive and serious personality but most of the time a i am sweet . I am very angry when I need to be . I like to respect people so they can respect me , I have a good family that take care of me and I take care of them . I have a big family and we try to get all together once a week . My favorite place to visit is Islas de la Bahia and New York , i have been in both and I will like to go again . I have values that my family teach me and I try to use it every time I can. My favorite sport is Volleyball and football but I only play volleyball . My favorite food is linguini but I don't eat it a lot .
I really like how you and your family try to get all together to have a good time
BorrarIs there other place that you have liked and visited before?
Dont use too many "my"
Je#1 Wp#1
ResponderBorrarBe Yourself:
Well I'm really happy ir that si what people say,maybe is because I usualy smile for almost everything.I like to practice sports, I swim and do olympic gymnastic.I hace comped for gymnastic, as well as for swimimg competition.Because pf I swim I have dark skin, curl hair and brown eyes.I use music to study and in some way it helps.I'm not a great student but I'm not so bad.I try to do an efford in classes that aré difficult or at least to me. So I try to ask for help ,usually to friends.Talking about friends ,mines are crazy , we all are but they make me laugh ,they are really important to me!So that is basicaly me,awhat I like and do, how I look ,and my friends .Hope it was intersting!
Stephany Bautista
T: I like the way you tell that eventhough you find some classes hard, you try your best to accomplish your goal.
BorrarA: Why are your friends a vital part of your life?
G: While you do your posts, i think you should really mind your grammer.
JE#1
ResponderBorrarWP#1
Know alAbout Me
Hello, my name is Jose Adan castelar Rivera I am 14 years old and I like to play basketball with my friends a lot. Also i like to play with my dogs called olaf and sansa ,my favorite food is chinese food and pasta. I really like playing with my ps3 too, i am pretty funny and happy. My hobbies are sleeping and watching TV. My favorite channels are "History TV" and "Tru TV" they are fun and entertaining to watch, I dont like doing homework but i try my best to get good grades, i jave 2 sisters and 1 big brother, my sister's name are Valeria Castelar and Ivana Castelar, my brother's name is Ivan Andre, my mom's name is Gloria Rivera and my dad's name is Ivan Castelar.
T- I like a lot how describe yourself it seems like you're a very glad person.
BorrarA- have you ever think how would your life could be if you were a more applied student?
G- I think you should use more complex words to emphasize better your description.
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ResponderBorrarJE#1
ResponderBorrarWP#2
Our Social Life
In my opinion friends are people who you can trust on very easily,they are mainly like your "other family" because they are people who make you laugh and make you feel better when you are feeling sad.So its important to have friends.Now what are friends for?Well ,as I said before they are people you can trust on,you tell them your deepest secrets.True friendship is when we come to call our friends"best friends".Now you cant call a stranger your friend and tell all about you to any person,you first have to know him/her better.There are many cases that people say they are your true friends and that they apreciate you but they might be just playing with you and your feelings and might lead to bullying.Thats why in my personal opinion you have to be sure who you are trusting.
Okay
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ResponderBorrarJE#1 WP#1
ResponderBorrarMirror Myself
Who I am? Well that's an interesting question that many people can't answer, but actually if I start thinking of anyone else, going deeply in my feelings I can actually tell who I am. I am a 15 years old boy really anxious to finish the school, and look the world from many new perspectives and learn about myself, knowing different ways of learning. I would like having a good future with a nice wife and 2 unique and beautiful children, and be a great family, I also appreciate the one that has always laugh from everything of life, no matter what, even when awful events occur:" there will be always time for everything, but you will know how to use the time properly." Never fight and give a smile to everyone, find new friends that will support you in life and enjoy even those small details. My physical appearance, I consider myself very, but very handsome. I am tall, dark brown eyes and not very dark color skin. I'm talented in sports and very smart in life, always looking for a solution and always learning of all the world and myself, repair all of my mistakes and very perseverant, when I am decided to complete a specific task, doesn't matter the importance it has. This is a bit of taste about and the real person who I am and my name is Christian Manuel Reichle Collier a person like any other that has dreams.
Hi Mrs.Digna I am Carlos Lopez
BorrarT~ I like that you always look for a suggestion.
A~How would you like to name your sons.
G~Be careful with the tense of the words you use.
Journal Entry 1
ResponderBorrarWriting Prompt 2
By:Andrea Escoto
My hommies, my family
Friends are an important aspect of life(but I 'm an introvert). In my opinion, a friend is a person (or even an animal ) you can count on, in difficult situations. This is important , sometimes people get closer to you because you have something they need, it happens oftenly , anyways you can't count on them. When you need something this type of people is of no avail because they don't have the ability or they do not have the initiative to do the right thing. A friend is someone who leads you to the best path, someone that couldn't do a thing to harm you. Many people hurt others , just to se them "down" (it result ls funny to some ). This includes people who influenced others in a horrible way, like bad-decision taking. Friends cheer you up when you're mad. A friend could be a family member, friends are reliable; being lonely can't be good either(if you are an introvert , one day en extrovert would like you and adopt you... Just kidding) . An examplebof a good friend is Monica Gaytan, despite being so far way from me, she helps me and cheers me up(she is my extrovert).
T- I like the way you describe what a friend is to you
BorrarA- Who would you consider your best friend?
G- You should watch out for spelling
~Ana Ortiz
JE#1 WP#2
ResponderBorrarFriend or Family in Need?
What's a friend? This is a very good reflection to think about, to know that person that will always put his chest to protect you at any cost and whenever you need so. In the dictionary it says that a friend is:" person attached to another by affection." That definition will be a diplomatic example and although a correct answer. But a friend for me will be this person you have always very nice and unique memories of that specific person, you share different feelings and love with that person.... You know that always they will be there if anything bad or also good, not any mistake and if there is one topic to improve or fix it and have the excellent relationship with that person, your family and the family even though they are not any relatives of your family they help you to stand up, sometimes more than your own real family. Ready to help at any time every day. There is a very huge difficulty with this specific type of special friends. This error is that they don't exist many of them now at days, the actual times, everybody takes advantage of your entire benefits, your posetions and looking more the side of materialistic things. This relationship and even much worse to lie to you all the days, since the first day to today, tomorrow and any day of the future, if you have a friend that complete the following description, vanish him from your life and if you have a good friend, take care of him.
Who I am?
ResponderBorrarI'm a human into a whole billion others. My name is Javier my hobbies are drawing, reading and learning new things. Mostly of the time i'm bored, I also take school everyday and I wish I could have fun but sometimes school is just crazy. The students make it really weird, I only like school when it's friday, so I can have free time. I also like taking pictures of landscapes and things that make the world a mysterious place. I want to study civil engineering, and i would like to become a professional in construction projects. I would really like that the global warming stop advancing in our planet because it puts in danger that life of humans and animals. In conclusion i would like to accomplished a lot of things but i can't.
T-The way you described the school is fascinating even though you call it weird
BorrarA-Why do student make weird school?
G-You should be in extra curricular activities because that way you wont be bored
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ResponderBorrarTo know about me
ResponderBorrarJE#1 WP#1
One of the things i like about me or one of my favorite things about me is my hair, and nose and my personality. Why my hair? Because i like it how it is because in my family all my brothers and my dad have like curly hair and its not soft as mine, solo thats why i like my hair. And why my nose? Well beacause it not a big nose or a little ,like my brother's is big. And why my personality? Beacause i am always taking the things too far , beacuse i dont hesitated y just do it ,beacause if i want something and then i don't do it i will regret it later. And the thing i don't like about me its that im not very social with people, im not saying im not social im saying that i want to be more social.
T- I really like the way you describe yourself.
BorrarA- How do you feel about adding things like you like for example your favorite food.
G- This is a good time to correct capitalization.
JE#1
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What is a Friend ?
You can have a lot of friends but not all of them are true friends. Sometimes you eat with all your friends but there is always a friend that you tell it everything . A true friend si someone that you can trust ,someone that you can tell everything and she or he would not tell anyone, someone that will help you in everything, someone that when you fall she or he will pick you up ,someone that doesn't judge you, someone that doesn't care about your skin color , someone that always care about you and when she/he looks you bad try to make you laugh. Now in days there are few true friends and you need to be careful in that .
J.E.#1
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What being me is like...
Well I love me. I'm a 14 years old kid from Honduras. I'm pretty short and good at sports such as basketball. Every lunch here, at my school, my friends and I play basketball and we always have a great time. Everytime someone fails a shot I start screaming at them. I'm kind of angry and I get desesperate when someone doesn't pass me the basketball. I love pizza, lasagna, and everything related to pastas are things I love to eat, especially the one that my mom prepares. I also like to play soccer, I was the goalkeeper, but then I began to play as a midfielder. I have two little sisters and one big brother. I always visit them and we like to talk and play. Besides soccer and playing basketball, I'm also good at volleyball. My friends and I like to play at lunch. I'm always willing to get good grades to make my parents proud, and I never miss any homework or project. I reay didn't like writing, but that is like to be me.
T- i like your enthusiam about sports
BorrarA- are you on any team either volleyball,basketball or soccer?
G-i think tou need to talk little more about yourself like not only sportS
J.E.#1
ResponderBorrarW.P. #2
The meaning of a friend
A friend is someone who is willing to help you in a bad situation. To be a true friend you need courage, besides you need to love your friend, take care of them, and never make them feel bad. A friend is someone that also stays with you in the good and in the bad times. Sometimes friends might fight, but they will always find a way to stop. Good friends are always by your side and will never give up on you no matter what happened. Also a friend makes you laugh, and can find a way to stop your crying. To have a friend you need to trust him, threat him food, and you won't mind to express your feeling to them. A friend is someone you can depend on, and obviously someone who you can talk to. A friend will never hurt your feelings, and he will be there for loving, playing, helping, and to comfort you all the time. A friend won't boss you around, and you will enjoy a friendship with them.
JE#1
ResponderBorrarWP#2
A True Friend
I have lots of friends but most of them are boys. For me a real friend is someone who is always with you at the good and at the bad times. In all the schools I have been I had met awesome people, specially in macris school. But on macris school I have had good friends and also "friends" that have used me and also taken advantage of our friendship. After being 2 years on macris school I moved to La Estancia School, possibly the best school i have been in. There i have met the best people, they are honest and fun to spent time with.
Je#1 Wp#2
ResponderBorrarFriend?
For me a friend is that person you can trust in that person you can talk for hours about nonsense things,or just stay in silence .But not an awkward silence a good silence,I don't know have to describe it.Maybe you can say you were friends as kids,but she or he don't talk to you any more then look for real friends.Usually you treat your real friends like brothers ,or better. You got the confidence to talk about anything ,you can be yourself with them.Hope you like it!
Stephany Bautista
Journal Entry 1 Writing Prompt 1
ResponderBorrarBy:Diana Rubio
My name is Diana Aurora Molina. I was born on August 23, 2001. I have two little siblings, I live with my dad, stepmother, and my siblings. I am a short girl with brown skin , I have small ears, black hair, big eyes color brown, big lips, and a round head. Sometimes I get an aggressive personality, but I have a very sweet personality, too. Sometimes I get mad very quickly so dont mess with me. I think my life is hard, my dad is a very strict person and my real mother left me when I was born. I think having a good communication with your family is very important. That is the best in the world. This can help you solve any problem you have. There is no better people than your family what is going on in your life. I would love to have a good communication with my family, I reaaly need someone to tell him all the problems and to ask him what is the best choice. Life is definitely not an easy game to play. Try to fit in your family, it will be kind of difficult but try to. Life comes with many obstacles but God will help get out of all those things.
T- I like how you say that family is important
BorrarA- How does having your family helped you through life?
G- Try emphasizing more
JE#1
ResponderBorrarWP#2
Sister from another mister
"Friend" a word from the germanic roots,definition:"a person who you like and enjoy being with;someone that supports and helps you."That's the general definition for a friend.But...what about TRUE FRIENDS?Throughout my whole life,I've had lots of "friends"but out of every 5 friends,only one of them has been a real friend to me.A friend,is a person who loves you,supports you,is there for you no matter what.Just like the tittle says,"sister from another mister"I've had the great opportunity of having 3 lovely and grateful friends.I consider them more than friends.For me,Ale,Pao,and stephany are like my sisters.I really don't know why,but I have the feeling of being the "oldest sister"Why?Well,because I always make sure that everything is alright between them,that they do their homework.
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BorrarJournal Entry 1 Writing Prompt 2
ResponderBorrarBy: Diana Rubio
A Friend
Some people say they have a lot of "friends", but it is better to have your cirlcle of friends smaller because you know who your real friends are. A friend is someone in who you can trust, someome you can tell everything, someone who you can tell any secret and you know she will not tell anyone. Someone that accepts you just the way you are, someone that is with you in the good and bad things, someone that will never let you down. A friend is so many things. Finding a good friend is very difficult in this days were almost all the persons are very hypocrite. Another reason is because true and good feelings. Friends may have problems, but all in this world can be solved. I think having a real relationship is like having a friendship. If you always tell the truth to your friends, tell them what you think and don't keep secrets. Being a good friend requires a lot of things. No one is perfect.
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ResponderBorrarKnow About Me JE#1 WP#1
ResponderBorrarI really like a lot of things about myself, and there are somethings I don't like. Today you are going to know some of them. One of the things I like about myself is my face and my personality, I like my face because I have big eyebrows and big eyelashes. I also like my eyes, they are not that clear instead they are like brown. I also like more things about my face . I like my personality. I'm a good hearted person that will give everything for my family and friends. I might bother but you may also bother me. I'm not that angry and that's one of the things I like about myself. Another thing I like about myself is that I will try you make you laugh even though you are angry. I will always be there for the persons I love. One of the things that I don't like about myself is my hair, I like the color of my hair but I don't like that is curly even though it is not that curly. If you read all of the above or you really know me you can notice there are more things I like about myself that things I don't like and I think all the people should be like this. The thing that I like the most is my family. My father name is Carlos Lopez and my mom name is Jissel Hernandez. I also have two sisters, one is called Lariza Lopez and my other sister is called Angie Lopez and I am Carlos Lopez.
ResponderBorrarJE# 1
WP#2
What is a friend
For some people a friend is just the person that is always there even in the hard times. But to me a friend is a little bit more than that. I may have hard time choosing a friend since I am very picky. I considered myself as a good friend because I am always there amd it doesn't matter the time or the situation I will be there. At this age is important who you choose as a friend or companion because probably that friendship may be everlasting. Some people look for qualities that his of her friend may have, but in the moment you meet a person you really do not care how she or he is. Friendship is not something you plan it just happens. You may have lots and lots of friends but actually they are just people you meet and get to know them a little bit more. Is very important who you consider your true friends. True friends are the ones that are there and act more like your parents because they care of what you may become in the future or what type of person you may grow to be. In conclusion you have to be picky of who you call a Friend.
I really like the way how you describe what a friend is, and also the ways that you think that someone does to become a true friend.
BorrarDo you prefer to have a small group or large group of friends?
I think you should be careful with your grammar, and also in the way how you express yourself.
Journal entry # 1
ResponderBorrarMirror mirror on the wall
When people talk about themselves they don't know what to say or what they are or what is their purpose is and they don't know their strengths and weaknesses but if I look deep inside I know who I am, I am a fourteen year old boy who studies at La Estancia School, I am white and small tiny almost, I am kind and always willing to help and I love helping well not but I'll still do it because that's who I am.
I really like the way you think of yourself. It is good to have a high self-esteem.
BorrarDid you really wrote the first sentece? This is all your prompt?
Try to write more and to describe more the topic that was given.
By: Diana Rubio
JE#2
ResponderBorrarWP#2
What's a friend
Friend is a word very complicated because a real friend needs to be someone you can really trust you can tell fim problems or personal conflicts. If she or he is your friend then that means that she or he would help you or try to help you on whatever you need or happend in your life and you need to do the same with your friend to be a real friend and its my way of thinking that is more dificult to find a real friend than to find a wife. A real friend donot bother you he helps you and even though you can have fun with your friends.
Friend Meaning JE#1 WP#2
ResponderBorrarBefore I start writting what is a friend ,I will write the definition of whom one knows,like and trust.So my meaning of a friend is a kind of similar.For me a friend is that person who is always there for you,in your best days,your normal days and your worst days.A friend is a person who always supports you and gives you advuces.It is also a person who doesnt judge you in any aspect,neither on any mistake or wrong decision.Friends are also people who will forgive you because we all hace a fifferent opinion which can lead to a fight abd if it is a real friendship they will forgive.This is more for a best friend she/he will know you like really know you,she/ he know everything you like or dislike.Also a peeson who is always therw for you and knows what to do to cheer you up.A person who listen to your problems and is not like "please i dont want to hear your problems anymore.Some you have all your trust in and you know she/he will be loyal with you ,she/he wont gossip you private things.For me a friend,a real friend,should have all this qualities to be the best friend.
By:Maria F.Martin
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A true friend
What is a true friend?A true friend for me is a person that is always for you, in the bad ways and in the good ways. A friend is someone that you share anything with them , everything thats is going on with you in your day. Also a true friend is someone that makes you laugh in days that you are down for something. And also is someone that you can call best friend o even a brother. A friend is also someone that you have a lot of trust that is welcome to your family etc. And last, a friend is also someone that can help you with girl, what to say to that girl. So that is a friend for me
True Friends JE#1 WP#2
ResponderBorrarI consider someone to be a true friend, someone that will always be there for me, and will always give me advices and ask me how I m doing. He can look to me like if we where from the same family like brothers and sister. I know a lot of people but I not consider them friends they are just people I know. A true friend will help you making a decision and will give you advices, but no matter what they will always support you. In life friends come and go and you have to learn how to choose them. I have learn that they are a lot of people that won't make things true friends do for you That's how friendship works first you consider them friends, then brothers and then they are from your same family you become so close to them you want to be all the time with them because you have fun and talk with them. Not all friends are forever so you have to learn how to choose them. True friends are the ones that are always for you no matter what.
T-I like your meaning of a true friend.
BorrarA-Are you a good friend?
G-Be careful with commas and apostrophe
True Friends JE#1
ResponderBorrarWP#2
What are friends?Thats a very difficult question to answer now a days because most of the people today have become really un loyal. Today you have to choose wisely with whom you are going to be friends.But a really good friend is the one who accepts you no matter how stupid,crazy or weird you are and they will be in the good and bad days.When you feel like you are dying he or she will the posible to make you feel better.For me a true friend is the who speaks you kindly sometimes but in other situations he or she could insult you but rather no matter how he insults you,you still love him.Best friends are the ones who keep your head up and right for you to go in the right direction,not doing bad things.If you are my best friend you will need to have a lot of patience,because I always say non sense things.Best friends are treasures so we need to take care of them.
This is me
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Well,I am Rossel Ulises Lobo Maradiaga a tall, dark skin guy with just 14 years. That lives in Tegucigalpa about 6 years ago and that loves to play soccer or any sport. One of the things I like the most about myself is the way I think, the way I look the life, its kind of funny because everyone saids that I don't have feelings for anyone, because the way I look the life. I always say " Thats is not the only person your gonna meet". I think I am someone happy that always find a good way for all the things, that help the people for not feeling sad, I love to help because I think I am good for that for helping others. One of the things I don't like about myself is that I became stress in about seconds and my mood changes, and I started feeling angry. I am someone that always saids the true doesn't matter if you're going to feel bad, I say it. I think this is bad because I make feel sad or bad the people and that's not good, but anyways I say the true. This are somethings about myself, this is me.
JE#1 WP#2
ResponderBorrarWho i consider a friend?
A real friend is someone who is there with you always in good and bad times.Is a person who's always by your side, it helps you out in everything you need to realize, but is also a good and kind person. A friend is really important because they can help yoy out in your daily life activities but you also have to find the differences between real and fake friends. In my life I've had many friends that were fake but time reveals how fake they are. So I got rid of them and maybe by now they are having better friends that relate with them and a better life. I'm also having a better life beacuse I feel like i got rid of something heavy from my life. Maybe real friends are shape when time passes by.
JE#1
ResponderBorrarWP#1
My name is Fernando Maradiaga.In this entry I will explain all the things about me,what do I like and what I hate.what are my personal thoughts and how I look like.Well I'm going to start with my physical appearance I'm short im like 1.67,I got dark brown eyes and black hair.Im short and fat but lets say i dint like my height.You might ask why? Well i don't like it because I see my friends and they are all tall and theres me and fabian,but I have to deal with it.Now I will talk about my personality,I think I got a lot things I should change,I need to improve my patience.I go crazy if the things aren't done fast.I find hard doing a lot of things specially homework,its so boring.Im super angry that would the hardest thing for me to control because when I get mad,oh man you better prepare.But rather that I consider being a really chill person.
T:I like the way you describe yourself with urban words like chill
BorrarA:Why do you find school task so difficult
G: you should learn how to control your anger
Know About Me JE#1 WP#1
ResponderBorrarMrs.Digna I am Carlos Lopez
I really like a lot of things about myself, and there are somethings I don't like. Today you are going to know some of them. One of the things I like about myself is my face and my personality, I like my face because I have big eyebrows and big eyelashes. I also like my eyes, they are not that clear instead they are like brown. I also like more things about my face . I like my personality. I'm a good hearted person that will give everything for my family and friends. I might bother but you may also bother me. I'm not that angry and that's one of the things I like about myself. Another thing I like about myself is that I will try you make you laugh even though you are angry. I will always be there for the persons I love. One of the things that I don't like about myself is my hair, I like the color of my hair but I don't like that is curly even though it is not that curly. If you read all of the above or you really know me you can notice there are more things I like about myself that things I don't like and I think all the people should be like this. The thing that I like the most is my family. My father name is Carlos Lopez and my mom name is Jissel Hernandez. I also have two sisters, one is called Lariza Lopez and my other sister is called Angie Lopez and I am Carlos Lopez.
True Friends JE#1 WP#2
ResponderBorrarMrs. Digna I am Carlos Lopez
I consider someone to be a true friend, someone that will always be there for me, and will always give me advices and ask me how I m doing. He can look to me like if we where from the same family like brothers and sister. I know a lot of people but I not consider them friends they are just people I know. A true friend will help you making a decision and will give you advices, but no matter what they will always support you. In life friends come and go and you have to learn how to choose them. I have learn that they are a lot of people that won't make things true friends do for you That's how friendship works first you consider them friends, then brothers and then they are from your same family you become so close to them you want to be all the time with them because you have fun and talk with them. Not all friends are forever so you have to learn how to choose them. True friends are the ones that are always for you no matter what.
JE#1 WP#2
ResponderBorrarDanira Avila
A Friend is that person that is always there for you no matter the circumstances , A Friend is always helping you, is also a support to you, you can talk to them about anything, and they always will help with problems, works and many things. A bestfriend is like your other half or the other part of you. Im not a very social person but i like to have friends. But sometimes you fight with your friends some friends leave you, but other friends want to arrange things with you, but only true friends are the one you cant count them with your fingersot. Some friends are for good and there are some friends that you have to take away from your life that ones that talks things behind your back and they say that they are your friends but they arent.You have to be careful on what kind of friends you choose.
You can get confused. Friends are special they make you love, cry, they make happier your days when they are dark. Friends are very important and special to me.
JE#1 WR#1
ResponderBorrarDanira Avila
My name is Danira Avila,I'm a tall girl,I have dark skin and I have curly malicious hair, I have very small eyes and eyelashes,and also I have medium lips,I have dark medium eyebrows and, circular face shaped.I have a kind personality once you get to know me,I like to help people and I get mad very quickly.I'm very shy at first sight but when you get to know me I'm a totally different person,I dont like hugs and also I'm a very cold person and I'm always serious,I dont laugh too much and I get bored really fast.My thoughts are about a very popular topic nowadays the USA elections it is very important to our country to see who will win the elections because it can also benefit us or affect us in different ways, I would Like that Hillary Clinton could win the presidence of the white house because I like women who get involved in political causes and show that women cab get involved in politics too, also I would like Hillary to win elections because of how she talks about Honduras as a great country and also her campaign talk vey well about our country
T/ I like you are aware of important topics
BorrarA/ Why do you are a very cold and shy person?
G/ Have you investigated any other important topics?
T- i like what you wrote about a true friend.
ResponderBorrarA- Are you a true friend, and someone i could trust and ask for anything?
G- i think you write more about a true friend, there alots of things about a true friend.
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ResponderBorrarWhy I go to school?
For me school is a place were you acquired most of your knowledge, it's not a place were you learn all your knowledge but is a place of challenge that puts in practice everything you know. I honestly don't like going to school but I analyze that it's not an option it's something I really need to do to be someone in life. School is not that comfortable because not everthing is accepted there is a very rigid schedule and rules that you need to follow. I don't think school is a place were you find friends but instead learn that friends can be cruel and that is really hard to find a real friend. I also don't enjoy the 8 hours we spend at school some of the classes are really boring and yes i sleep on my desk. After all my complaints I think school is really important and I need to visit it if i want to become a professional.
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ResponderBorrarJust Me
My name is Danira Avila,I'm a tall girl,I have dark skin and I have curly malicious hair, I have very small eyes and eyelashes,and also I have medium lips,I have dark medium eyebrows and, circular face shaped.I have a kind personality once you get to know me,I like to help people and I get mad very quickly.I'm very shy at first sight but when you get to know me I'm a totally different person,I dont like hugs and also I'm a very cold person and I'm always serious,I dont laugh too much and I get bored really fast.My thoughts are about a very popular topic nowadays the USA elections it is very important to our country to see who will win the elections because it can also benefit us or affect us in different ways, I would Like that Hillary Clinton could win the presidence of the white house because I like women who get involved in political causes and show that women cab get involved in politics too, also I would like Hillary to win elections because of how she talks about Honduras as a great country and also her campaign talk vey well about our country
T/ I like you are aware of important topics
ResponderBorrarA/ Why do you are a very cold and shy person?
G/ Have you investigated any other important topics?
JE#2
ResponderBorrarWP#3
What it is school?
School is an important thing and place of us kids, because in school is where you learn lots of things. Like how to add, subtract, multiply and divide. You also learn how to read and write. School is also very important because is where you decide when you are junior or seniors and you decide what do you want to do when you grow up and what do you want to do with your life or what do you want to do for living. Also in school you learn virtues, such as honesty, responsability and respectful and to always be a good person. Also in school you get to know people in which this people can become your friends or best friend. And also this friends can become your girlfriend or boyfriend. So this is school for me.
T-I like and admire how you see the positive things about school
BorrarA-Do you really like going to school?
G-You should use more adjctives and more commas.
You should have post this in Journal Entry #2
JE#1 WP#2
ResponderBorrarDanira Avila
A Friend is that person that is always there for you no matter the circumstances , A Friend is always helping you, is also a support to you, you can talk to them about anything, and they always will help with problems, works and many things. A bestfriend is like your other half or the other part of you. Im not a very social person but i like to have friends. But sometimes you fight with your friends some friends leave you, but other friends want to arrange things with you, but only true friends are the one you cant count them with your fingersot. Some friends are for good and there are some friends that you have to take away from your life that ones that talks things behind your back and they say that they are your friends but they arent.You have to be careful on what kind of friends you choose.You can get confused. Friends are special they make you love, cry, they make happier your days when they are dark. Friends are very important and special to me.